Jeff 7P6 Home Work: D
This story is about 1 year ago in the 1st Quarter, at the day school when I checked my grade in sis (at this time, edline wasn’t available at school) then I see that I got 2 bad grades and those are math and Social studies. I was trying to hide but then when I got home, when my mom went into my brother’s room and my brother was talking something about grade at school, he told me that he was talking about the report card to my mom, he said that the report card will hand out soon. Then my mom got worried about me and my brother grade. She was totally worried, she called me and my brother to come down to her room and log on to sis to check my grade. At first my brother and I wasn’t remember what the password is, then my mom show us a bunch of paper and she said that maybe that paper that the school give us the account of the sis and tell us to find it in that bunch of paper. I checked, checked and at last I found it, but then I was really scared like an elephant scared of a mouse because if I give this to mom and then my mom will look at my grade and she will got angry and I got in a really big trouble. So I need to think of away to throw that paper away, I said to my mom that I can’t find it and I asked her to throw all of the paper away then she say yes, but when I open the door I saw my dad and he ask:” what are you doing with those paper?” (translate from Vietnamese to English) then I say that mom told me to throw them away then he ask mom what happen, my mom told my dad all over the story then my dad ask that is that paper that has the account in that bunch of paper that I was holding, then I said no, he said that did I look at it seriously and carefully and then I said yes, I thought that I was safe but then he tell me that give him those paper and he will check at it, I said that there are nothing in there but a bunch of useless paper. He said that give it to him but I keep say that there nothing in that bunch of paper. My mom force me to give it to dad, and when he look at it, he found that paper and said:” You look carefully?” and then my mom said that there really, she mean that 100% that there are something with me and my grade, she told to my brother that log on to the sis. First, he log on to my dad account first, but then I can’t log on (because I changed the password before), my brother said that he can’t log on to my dad school sis account, then my brother type to my mom’s sis account and then it’s finally logged on. My mom said that go to my grade first and then I knew that I was in a really big trouble. When she saw my 2 bad grade, she start to be really angry, then she go down stair, take a thick stick and tell me that lay down on the bed, I said sorry to my mom and she said no because at first if I say that I got 2 bad grade then she may probably forgive me but this time I wasn’t and then she also said that she will hit me 4 times (I have to tell that one 1 time she hit, you already cry because it’s freaking hurt like a man crashing with a car), then she hit me 1 time and don’t know I was screaming or crying or not because it’s so hurt and I don’t know who am I. Then my mom hit me a second time but it fail because my dad tell my mom to stop. Then my mom was like so angry and then she want to kick me out of the house. Then I come up stair and lay down. After 15 minute pass, my dad come up stair and tell me all. He told me to come downstairs and say sorry to her. I listened to him and then I come downstairs and say sorry to her, she now cool down but still a little bit angry, and then she tell to me that I shouldn’t lie to her and if there is something like I had a bad grade like that, I should talk to her and she will yell at me but not hit me like that because I was honest to her, she said that I am losing her trust and that was true. After that day, I was change and I starting to study hard to make my math and social studies grade go up and at the end of quarter 1, I got 3.14 and that was really good. When I get back home, she was totally proud of me and my brother because we all have a good report card and she said that if I work hard, I will get a good reward but if I not work hard I will not get anything but it will get worst. I realize that and I always remember what she taught me, and I will try to work harder and harder.
Good job Jeff. It's scary when parents get upset sometimes. Make sure you don't use slang in your writing. "Freaking" isn't appropriate in an essay unless it's in the dialog. Also use more descriptive language. Remember the five senses.
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